Not just a sample, but a whole entire book, of my writing, and another prayer request.

Long title. Sorry.

Anyway, it's a whole book (rather, story) of my writing...

...when I was about seven or eight years old!

hehe. Bet I fooled you there--'Izori's going to post a WHOLE story?!' It' really short.

And guess what. It's with original spelling and punctuation! The only thing I did was split it into paragraphs because it's easier to read that way.

'Patrick the Diver'

Once upon a time, there was a deep sea diver. His name was Patrick. One day, he decided to go diving. So he got his gear, put it in his car, and with a varoom-rooom took off.

Soon enough, Patrick came to the beach. Then he got in his boat with all his gear, and sailed out to the middle of the ocean and got his gear on. He gently lowered himself into the water.

The watter was pretty! On the out-side it shone and gleamed. Inside, well, there were dolfins, whale's, sharks, fish, crabs, clams, conks, and corral. An octopus floated by, with a crab in one of its long arms. Patrick pulled out an under-water-camera and snapped pictures. Then he took notes on a water-proof note pad. He saw a sea-horse clinging to a blade of seaweed. He took a picture of that too.

Out of the corner of his eye, Patrick saw a cave. He swam slowly inside. It was dark, so Patrick turned on his underwater flash-light. He shivered. The cave was very, very spooky!

Soon he came back out of the cave. Then he looked at his air pressure. He had fifteen minutes to get out of the water. Then he saw a great white [shark], at a distance. Patrick decided it was high time to get out of the water. so he swam slowly up, got on board his boat got off his gear, and went home.

The End.

Can you believe that?! How cute ;)

Luthien found it who-knows-where and gave it back to me. LOL. Could use some work...

Oh, and the prayer request. My other wrist has started to hurt. Badly. And it feels a lot like carpal tunnel syndrome. So please pray that it isn't!!!

Thanks,

Izori